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I have to say, the visuals are quite interesting and I like the tension/uneasiness of it all. The only part I don't like as much is the sound design. The dialogue is too quiet in contrast to the high-pitch frequencies throughout the video that are rough on the ears, in which I have to consistently adjust the volume of my speakers.

However, I love to see more stuff like this, as I can only see improvement from here!

JPSantoroArt responds:

I appreciate your feedback and will definitely take it into consideration when mixing future dialogue. I'm glad you enjoyed the shorts and I can see on speakers with so many sounds it could be difficult to hear. I had a feeling I should've turned her up a little more.

Thank you!

I mean, visually the backgrounds are detailed and tweened correctly, and the characters' animations look okay (minus bulb barely moving its legs despite running), but the setup and payoff end up flat. There's no reaction from any of the two characters before Hoss rolls in, everything is immediate with no transition. Also, what is the joke? - The fat guy just kills and eats them, and that a goat scream plays?
You have the potential to make great things for sure! You just need to work on the comedic aspect of your videos, with better timing and payoff. One tip I could give: build up to something, only to trick the viewer into showing something else that is downright absurd.

Anonymous-Frog responds:

I agree, not the best joke in the world. First time animating in 60FPS with no time to come up with anything aside from “Indiana Jones boulder”. Plus I got canceled on Twitter which really fucked with my head near the end.

Better than most k-pop and k-pop music videos.

But seriously I just love the transitions and her friends' reactions. Everything works so well together in this video!

I wanna play neo geo now (whatever that is (─‿‿─)

I love how this art style genuinely fits the year that this story takes place in. Distinctly Newgrounds!

That was just as creepy as usual, probably even more so!! ^^

although I think the animation is a little stilted at points than what I'm accustomed to, the visuals and sounds are still quite interesting, and this video really gives off the "pleasantly" creepy aura that I adore. The work put into these vids are quite impressive! Good job! :D

This art style is pretty unique, the animation's cute, and athough I wish there could've been more to it story-wise (like twists and turns or something suspensful), this looked very interesting to watch. I like to see you do more animations in this style in the future! ;)

THAT FUCKING ENDING LMAO

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